“A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they
enter college.”
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the
recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and
supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the
recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples
shape your position.
The knowledge that students have till they enter college is based upon the what subject and topics they learn in school. The thing and knowlege that students get in school forms the basis of their life.
Currently, the nation has different curriculum for different states, which is more or less similar. The difference is mainly based upon the primary language the student has opted for. For instance, in India, each state has it's own language and parents prefer to have their childern educated in the primary language of that area. However, most of the colleges we have English as their primary language. This makes it difficult for the students to catch up with the college sysllabus. Having the national curriculum wil solve this problem by have one primary language, mostly English, so that students don't suffer in future.
If we consider the subject wise curriculum of different states, subjects likes Mathematics and Science have similar topics. But the subjects like literature differ from place to place. Also, subjects based upon histroy and geography tends to give more information about that particular area or state. Thus, the students have knowledge required to survive and live in that particular area. But, nowadays, it is seen that many students migrate to different states and cities for educational reasons. If they are not smart enough, they suffer a lot of problems in the start. If the nation has same curriculum, it will contain small bit and pieces of information about complete nation, which would helpful when the student relocate for any reason in future.
Along with curriculum, the patterns of examination and grading also differ from place to place, thus, forming the opinions about the examination being easy or difficult based upon scoring of the students. Students of Bihar, a state in India, always score more than any other state. This can also create a false image above students about students in particular area. It is neccessary to have a common examination pattern and grading system for all students.
Considering all the above points, it can be concluded that, if a nation has same national curriculum for all its students till they enter college, it would be very beneficial for the future of the students as well as nation. This is halp create uniformatity.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 519, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (wil) must be used with a third-person verb: 'solves'.
Suggestion: solves
...bus. Having the national curriculum wil solve this problem by have one primary langua...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 601, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...guage, mostly English, so that students dont suffer in future. If we consider the...
^^^^
Line 3, column 613, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...y English, so that students dont suffer in future. If we consider the subject wise cur...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 744, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...hen the student relocate for any reason in future. Along with curriculum, the pattern...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, well, for instance, in particular, as well as, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1937.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 380.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09736842105 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51952348966 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6532050555 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2380952381 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0952380952 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239164043147 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714262652354 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072310155526 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149111138448 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663155497259 0.0667264976115 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 519, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (wil) must be used with a third-person verb: 'solves'.
Suggestion: solves
...bus. Having the national curriculum wil solve this problem by have one primary langua...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 601, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...guage, mostly English, so that students dont suffer in future. If we consider the...
^^^^
Line 3, column 613, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...y English, so that students dont suffer in future. If we consider the subject wise cur...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 744, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...hen the student relocate for any reason in future. Along with curriculum, the pattern...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, well, for instance, in particular, as well as, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1937.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 380.0 442.535393258 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09736842105 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51952348966 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 215.323595506 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.6532050555 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2380952381 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0952380952 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.83258426966 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239164043147 0.243740707755 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714262652354 0.0831039109588 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072310155526 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149111138448 0.150359130593 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663155497259 0.0667264976115 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 14.1392134831 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.1639044944 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.