A nation should require all of students to study same national curriculum until they enter college
Students should study the same national curricula up to a certain level and that level is until they enter college according to the recommendation. I mostly agree with the recommendation for specially three reasons.
First of all college and after college education offer specialized subject knowledge and grading that knowledge need the strong baseline understanding. For example if one student intend to study philosophy in college , he may require the knowledge of science. If he or she had studied only arts before entering college , this would be very much frustrating to adapt with new terms and new subjects of which he or she didn't know anything. Same will be happened for the one who wants to enter in life scientific field and research and if he or she is from science background and didn't read any arts and culture and somehow if she need to know the culture or history of a particular topic to do the research, it will be problematic.
Secondly before entering college most of the students are not that much sure about their future education and sometimes they dream about entering into different discipline and profession. With time perceptions and preferences may change and the students may change their decision. If all the students study the same national curricula up to the college level education they will be benefited in future during the college entrance and they can move to any field of their interest.
Third reason for going with the recommendation is solving real life problem and going with the wind of change. Now the modern world is mostly technology dependent and people needs to have scientific knowledge to operate the product of technology and solve trivial problem otherwise he or she may need other's help. On the other hand in this life culture, history, arts , philosophy , songs are also the food of mind and if one studied science solely before entering college she or he might not be interested in all these , which are necessary. Finally to cope up with this modern world and at the same time to enjoy the life meaningfully everyone needs to have minimum knowledge of every aspects. So all students should study the same national curricula as per recommendation
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...tudied only arts before entering college , this would be very much frustrating to ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...rms and new subjects of which he or she didnt know anything. Same will be happened fo...
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...ppened for the one who wants to enter in life scientific field and research and i...
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... he might not be interested in all these , which are necessary. Finally to cope up...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...ted in all these , which are necessary. Finally to cope up with this modern world and a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, for example, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1832.0 2235.4752809 82% => OK
No of words: 370.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95135135135 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7151905192 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 215.323595506 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47027027027 0.4932671777 95% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7693867613 60.3974514979 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.857142857 118.986275619 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4285714286 23.4991977007 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 5.21951772744 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344862201649 0.243740707755 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136376354129 0.0831039109588 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149239014966 0.0758088955206 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243808180351 0.150359130593 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905955923036 0.0667264976115 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 14.1392134831 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.8420337079 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 100.480337079 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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