As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
In recent days technology has revolutionized human’s lives and has had much impacts on how people think or solve problems. Although advanced technology make people’s life easier and can help them to save time for critical thinking, nobody can deny the deleterious impacts of developing technology on different types of human thinking such as learning, memory, reasoning and problem solving in different ways. Thus, I agree with the claim that technology diminish the ability to think in a critical way.
Surely one of the greatest advances in technology is the developing of internet. internet is an extremely network which has consisted of kinds of data and people can use it to find the answer of all their questions in the easiest way. With respect to human’s tendency to do easy things we can guess that most people would choose find the answer of their question and solving their problems by using internet instead of critical thinking. And based on the “use it or lose it” theory, when you don’t try to think about your problems and find out the way of solving it by critical thinking it’s not surprising if using internet causes decreasing our ability to think critically about ourselves.
Furthermore, we all know that advances in technology make life not only easier, but also busier. Today people waste a lot of time in virtual networks such as Facebook, twitter, etc. and just talk about their personal life and superficial subjects. Therefore they don’t have enough time to critical think about more important issues. also another example of negative consequences of new technologies is making very stentorian voices of kinds of machine which distract us from thinking deeply about our problems.
In conclusion, though utilizing technology has had a lot of valuable impacts on humans every day life, we should also consider the harmful effects of it such as deteriorating of critical thinking ability and it’s our duty to find a solution for making balance between developing of new technologies and critical thinking ability.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
In recent days technology has revolutionized human&apo...
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Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...tionized human's lives and has had much impacts on how people think or solve pr...
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Line 1, column 495, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a critical way" with adverb for "critical"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...echnology diminish the ability to think in a critical way. Surely one of the greatest advances...
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Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Internet
...chnology is the developing of internet. internet is an extremely network which has consi...
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Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('extremely') instead an adjective, or a noun ('network') instead of another adjective.
...the developing of internet. internet is an extremely network which has consisted of kinds of data an...
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Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to find'
Suggestion: to find
...can guess that most people would choose find the answer of their question and solvin...
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Line 5, column 249, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...personal life and superficial subjects. Therefore they don't have enough time to cri...
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Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...ical think about more important issues. also another example of negative consequence...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: also,
...ical think about more important issues. also another example of negative consequence...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, such as, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 19.5258426966 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 335.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24776119403 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82734633181 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 215.323595506 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54328358209 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 704.065955056 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.9999659933 60.3974514979 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.230769231 118.986275619 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7692307692 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 5.21951772744 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210002478108 0.243740707755 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800753552168 0.0831039109588 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448085180302 0.0758088955206 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131869851343 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366143791804 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.1392134831 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.1639044944 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.8971910112 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.