As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Technology in many shapes, forms, and devices is shaping our life in many aspects, we can't deny the fact that our lives revolve around technology, the phone in our pocket, tablets, computers, laptops, to the devices we use in the household to ease up our work.
Technology is developed by humans to ease up their work and take the leisure of time; the primary goal of technology advancement is to increase people’s efficiency. Tech helps in the advancement of the country to increasing the economy altogether.
America topping the list of the technological world, the technical hub is the other name of America. The advancement of technology continues to flatter there and helping the world to get solutions for their problems. In crisis times like the covid-19 pandemic, the advanced technology helped the countries to get to the bottom of the disease and it is the technology that made it possible to produce the covid vaccine and helped the world to fight against this disease.
Talking about technology there are numbers of factors to tell how technology has eased our way, we get the information of vaccines through technology like phones, by which we get the news of overseas. The numerous app developed by the IT industry has made our life much easier and efficient.
For comparison we can look back, the hardship the people had gone through, there was a time when people has to do long calculations for maintaining finance, recording long piles of paperwork and so much stress of losing the information, there was no security of data storage, yet technology has eased our life by advancing our world and introducing tools like web storage, calculators, phones and the list is long.
Humans are building technology to help out other humans, and technology is becoming a real friend to us, it can be available all the time, can be handy like a phone is a technology full of features which help us in our day to day to life, getting the news in seconds, to connecting overseas in minutes, to getting the solution of problems, to schedule our time, to managing overtime by meeting up through web and saving up time for better work.
Technology is creating a meaningful change around as, from problem-solving to security to finance to health to whatever word comes in your mind. Technology is not deteriorating humans but enhanced the positivity around us, multiplied our handy tools for every problem in our lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 87, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...is shaping our life in many aspects, we cant deny the fact that our lives revolve ar...
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Line 7, column 232, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...overseas. The numerous app developed by the IT industry has made our life much easier ...
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Line 10, column 220, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'day to'.
Suggestion: day to
...y full of features which help us in our day to day to life, getting the news in seconds, to c...
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Line 12, column 198, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding positivity'?
Suggestion: the surrounding positivity
...s not deteriorating humans but enhanced the positivity around us, multiplied our handy tools for every p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, second, so, as to, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 74.0 58.6224719101 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2028.0 2235.4752809 91% => OK
No of words: 411.0 442.535393258 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93430656934 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80626321264 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501216545012 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 23.0359550562 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.64484915 60.3974514979 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 169.0 118.986275619 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.25 23.4991977007 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13506008297 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604040474207 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0469076066948 0.0758088955206 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760868354236 0.150359130593 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450411294216 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 14.1392134831 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 48.8420337079 76% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 12.1743820225 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.8971910112 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 11.2143820225 139% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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