People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
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Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Decisions based on emotions tend to sound absurd at first but they are usually sound when logically considered afterwards. While careful analysis of a subject matter based on logic can at times yield the desired goal, they are mostly impracticable in the real world yet people who have based their life choices on emotions have achieved a much more in life. Decisions based on logic may seem sound initially but those made on the basis of emotions are the ones that change the world.
When Martin Luther King Jr, one of the greatest orator in history, made his famous "I have a dream speech", the concensus of the populace was that it was unachievable for a black man to be the president of America, that it was just that - a dream. However, some decades later we were all proven wrong when the young Barack Obama, having listened to the speech was moved and motivated to bring it to fulfilment. Barack Obama acted on his emotions and a few years later, it turned out to be the best decision in his life, second to marrying Michelle. He attained what no other black man could boast of.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 67, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., one of the greatest orator in history, made his famous 'I have a dream spe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 14.8657303371 34% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 58.6224719101 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 2235.4752809 40% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 195.0 442.535393258 44% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62051282051 5.05705443957 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 4.55969084622 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41543243076 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 215.323595506 59% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646153846154 0.4932671777 131% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 704.065955056 41% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.2370786517 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4934176471 60.3974514979 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.714285714 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8571428571 23.4991977007 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 5.21951772744 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.97078651685 40% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 10.2758426966 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134412648775 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663373858052 0.0831039109588 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615190460744 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106113106819 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686745619004 0.0667264976115 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 48.8420337079 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 12.1743820225 103% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.1639044944 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 100.480337079 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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