The following is a petition to the city council of Centerville:
"Over the past three years, there has been a marked increase in cases of 'sidewalk rage,' similar to the irrational anger drivers experience on the road, but instead among sidewalk walkers. The result is an increase in assaults, property damage, and disruptions of normal pedestrian traffic. In order to address this growing problem, the council must ban cell phone use on sidewalks. Not only do people texting or using their phones slow down pedestrian traffic, but they are also more likely to walk into the road or bump into other walkers. Children are especially vulnerable because they are too short to be easily seen. Middletown passed such a ban and not only have they heard no complaints, but the reported incidents of sidewalk crime has gone down significantly."
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
Although the author present an cogent case on baning the cell phone on sideways to decrease the increased cased on sidewalk rage. But there are many factors that we need to consider that issuing such a order will have the same effect as in Middletown.
According to recent study in Harward business Review, the use of cell phone have decreased over 50% in the span of three years in Centervill . Now a days people don't use cell phones as they used to use in earlier times. Which is in directy in contract to the use of cell phones in Middletown. Apparently in city like london where people usally tend to use cell phone over sidewalk, have seen decreased in sidewalk rage cases.
So what is root cause for the increased sidewalk rage cases on sidewalk? There can be numerios other cause for the same if we take recent history into study. According to the study in Economic times, the mental stress has increased over the past three years. People are more tend to distruct object in order to remove stress. Also considering the fact that mostly cases are reported in mid-night, where there is least human traffic in place.
In conclusion it will be better to further study the key aspect for increase in such cases, If we pass the notion to ban cell phones in sidewalk, how will the people who are new will navigate using google maps. Anoint of safety office to such areas is an better option than baning the use of cell phones in side walk as whole.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
No. of Sentences: 13 15
No. of Words: 263 350
No. of Characters: 1164 1500
No. of Different Words: 138 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.027 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.426 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.151 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 74 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 41 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 32 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 14 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.231 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.985 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.462 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.366 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.592 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.141 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although the author present an cogent case on ba...
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Line 1, column 29, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
Although the author present an cogent case on baning the cell phone on...
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Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...t we need to consider that issuing such a order will have the same effect as in M...
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Line 3, column 141, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...in the span of three years in Centervill . Now a days people dont use cell phones ...
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Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...the span of three years in Centervill . Now a days people dont use cell phones as they use...
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Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...years in Centervill . Now a days people dont use cell phones as they used to use in ...
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Line 3, column 221, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s as they used to use in earlier times. Which is in directy in contract to the use of...
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Line 5, column 327, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...truct object in order to remove stress. Also considering the fact that mostly cases ...
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Line 5, column 410, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the least'.
Suggestion: is the least
... are reported in mid-night, where there is least human traffic in place. In conclusio...
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Line 7, column 253, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...noint of safety office to such areas is an better option than baning the use of ce...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, if, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.6327345309 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 11.1786427146 9% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 28.8173652695 28% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 55.5748502994 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 16.3942115768 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 2260.96107784 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 262.0 441.139720559 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56488549618 5.12650576532 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.56307096286 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21792648809 2.78398813304 80% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 204.123752495 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545801526718 0.468620217663 116% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 705.55239521 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0230387961 57.8364921388 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0 119.503703932 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 23.324526521 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 5.70786347227 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.25449101796 190% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159768479913 0.218282227539 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667630540209 0.0743258471296 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810154238435 0.0701772020484 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105110449945 0.128457276422 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452006775637 0.0628817314937 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 14.3799401198 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.3550499002 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.5979740519 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 98.500998004 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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