Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
The word 'impossible', it simply means that something which is not possible, but at the same time it can be written as 'I M Possible'. The way a person visualizes a problem changes everything.There are many things around us, which were not possible a while ago, but someone did thought of solving that problem. The point is science and technology enable us to make things possible. I am making my point very clear here that yes indeed in future with science and technology we can solve most of the society's problems.
There was a time when doctors were not able to operate interal body parts of the patient. But with today's innovative instuments and ultra small cameras, it is possible.
Even there are patents of nano bots, which in future can go into patient's body and cure him. The medical science has been benifited immensely because of these advancements in science.
Similarly, science have evolved greately in other areas. For example, its easiser to make climate predictions, if an hurricane is about to hit a coast, residents are safely evacuated. And also, new projects my SpaceX to reach from one part of the world to other in no time, is helping in bringing the world much closer.
There were disases like polio which are on verge of extinction, research is going on making cancer curable drug. All these things point to one and only one direction that science is making world a better place to live.
In contrast there are some disadvantages, creating an artificial intelligent smart robot may one day end our civilization. Global warming is on high rise due to various industrial and commercial development. But all these things can be prevented, technology only enables us to make things better, it is we humans upon on which it ultimately depends that how are we making use of that innovation.
In nutshell, I conclude that, yes one day science and technology will be able to solve all of society's problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 189, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...visualizes a problem changes everything.There are many things around us, which were n...
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Line 1, column 275, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'think'
Suggestion: think
...t possible a while ago, but someone did thought of solving that problem. The point is s...
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Line 11, column 115, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...easiser to make climate predictions, if an hurricane is about to hit a coast, resi...
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Line 19, column 4, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...g world a better place to live. In contrast there are some disadvantages, creating ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, similarly, so, while, for example, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 12.9106741573 93% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 331.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88217522659 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70075426892 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580060422961 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.8909302869 60.3974514979 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.0588235294 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4705882353 23.4991977007 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88235294118 5.21951772744 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31172165879 0.243740707755 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953093082391 0.0831039109588 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162489360653 0.0758088955206 214% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173821547427 0.150359130593 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.220948487503 0.0667264976115 331% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 14.1392134831 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 100.480337079 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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