Science and technology will one day be able to solve all of society’s problems.
I definitely agree with the statement that all of society’s problems could be solve by the technologies and science one day. But rather than technologies replace the human and take the control, they should stay as a useful tools to offer solutions for people.
The opponents may argue that the machine which doesn’t have mind could not solve the society problems of human. It’s the culture of people, not a technical stuff and there is no explicitly formula or rule for any people and it can’t just provide the solution by calculation. For example, if there is a society issue like the gradually declination of the birth rate. Naysayers may claims that there is no way for technology to raise the birthday rate in practical. Although it is true that the proliferation of human population could not be replaced with the machine or science if the moral rule is complied. However, by the computation models, we could use analytic methodologies to assess the effectiveness of the policies of raising birth rate. Therefore, currently, science is a useful tool helping us to make the decision more judicious.
Until recently, Science and technology only could deal with the problems within limited scope which incorporating calculating like communication, biology. Nevertheless, artificial intelligence is abruptly catching everyone’s attention, in a famous chess competition of human versus computer, the king of the chess has been defeated by computers based on AI (artificial intelligence) engine, thus, it demonstrated that technology would become so potent that it could process more complexity problems like society issue. For instance, by big data analysis from the consuming habits of thousands of hundreds online buyers, AI could predict the proclivities or the future market trend so that it could predict the future benefit in the market and help the store owners to make more money. Furthermore, it could extend the knowledge of big data to predict the society issues like high age medical caring. By using the big data of the national medical data from patients, it knows the increasing of the certain disease for high age group, then it could prepare or prescribe in advance to avoid the disease in first very much place. Therefore, conceivably the science would solve all of the society’s issues one day.
Nevertheless, the technology itself could induce a critical society’s problem if it’s too powerful. For example, nuclear bomb is a weapon, invented by scientists, could cause catastrophic disasters that could kill thousands of hundreds of people. And conspicuously it would become one of the most critical society’s issue. Similarly, if AI develops so powerful one day, maybe it would dominate the human society and even replace it. Like the plot in the movie called “terminator”, the whole world is controlled by robots and computers that causes a huge problem. Therefore, we could be heedful to use technologies.
In conclusion, all of the society’s problems, certainly, could be fixed by science or technologies by rapidly evolved AI. When we enjoy the convenience from technology, we’re suggested to be careful to use it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, similarly, so, then, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2663.0 2235.4752809 119% => OK
No of words: 508.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24212598425 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74751043592 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99207094334 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 838.8 704.065955056 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4286646398 60.3974514979 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.782608696 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0869565217 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.39130434783 5.21951772744 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301122942776 0.243740707755 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107771410354 0.0831039109588 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13627634257 0.0758088955206 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215234101498 0.150359130593 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896054792765 0.0667264976115 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.1743820225 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.1639044944 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.38706741573 106% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 100.480337079 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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