Technology causes more problems for modern societies than it solves.
Technology, by definition, is a tool which aid human interactions among themselves and also with the environment. Some would argue that technology causes more harm than good. But others would state that technology causes more good than harm. After weighing the evidence, it is clear that technology solves more problem than it does causes.
In modern societies where population grow by certain amount each year, technology continues to provide easy communication. The communication range has increased from within office environment to inter country communication. For a person on a long business trip, it is convenient to connect to family and friends through video call just by making use of a smart phone. Business operates effectively, with technology. Mode of business advertisement has greatly improve from radio, bill board and sticker to advertisement medium to sites, blog and apps such as: whatsapp which has lots of thousands or million users everyday. These will enhance rate at which sales are made and profit realized.
In the education sector, with improve technology, some research can now carry out simulations making use of very fast computers. Researchers can share data among one another regardless of the vast distance among them. Final year project student will find his project work easy to execute just by making use of the internet. More resources to work with are available online; this is due to technology.
Technology may serves as distraction to children under the age of 18. Apart from providing adequate information regarding school work and other relevant information, it may expose them to bad act such as watch of pornography or adult content. This, if not controlled, may lead to the child becoming a nuisance to the society growing up. Adequate parent supervision may reduce or prevent this negative aspect of technology.
In conclusion, it is clear that technology causes more good than harm. Easy communication, business activities and research are made easier with technology; and with parent guidance children can escape the bad side of it. For anything, stating that technology causes problem than it solves serve only as a way to understand the impact of technology in modern societies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 460, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'improved'.
Suggestion: improved
...e of business advertisement has greatly improve from radio, bill board and sticker to a...
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Line 3, column 600, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...whatsapp which has lots of thousands or million users everyday. These will enhance rate...
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Line 3, column 614, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... has lots of thousands or million users everyday. These will enhance rate at which sales...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, regarding, so, apart from, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 33.0505617978 57% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 12.9106741573 147% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1887.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 355.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31549295775 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89635002778 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597183098592 0.4932671777 121% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 704.065955056 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8616655567 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8571428571 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9047619048 23.4991977007 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335101840223 0.243740707755 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0991056914076 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143982250878 0.0758088955206 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186550712674 0.150359130593 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.170676910013 0.0667264976115 256% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 48.8420337079 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.38706741573 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 100.480337079 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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