True success can be measured primarily in terms of the goals one sets for oneself
By setting the goals for oneself one can achieve the success. One should set the goal first, then chase the goal. By haunting the goal definitely one can achieve the great success.
Suceess is not so easy as one think of it. It can be achieved by hardwork, patience, commitment, determination etc. During the path of success there will be many impedences, but one need to overcome all the impedences to achieve the goal. The difficulties one face during their journey will teach a lot of lessons in their life, by which they will come to know how to overcome these problems. Messy and Ronaldo who are the two football pillars of current generation have achieved the great sucees by perseverance.
Without setting the goals, it is impossible to achieve the success. People without setting the goals are lethargic, they don’t have the ambition to achieve the goal. In day to day life IT have become a boon for some of the employees who won’t care of their goals. In olaympics only those who set their goals and work hard for it are able able to win the medals.
Thus, true success can be measured primarily in terms of the goals one sets for oneself an at the same time he should work hard to achieve the goal.
- Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain. 33
- Arctic deer live on islands in Canada's arctic regions. They search for food by moving over ice from island to island during the course of the year. Their habitat is limited to areas warm enough to sustain the plants on which they feed and cold enough, at 38
- Woven baskets characterized by a particular distinctive pattern have previously been found only in the immediate vicinity of the prehistoric village of Palea and therefore were believed to have been made only by the Palean people. Recently, however, archa 43
- Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts. 33
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...patience, commitment, determination etc. During the path of success there will be...
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Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...achieve the goal. In day to day life IT have become a boon for some of the employees...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...y to day life IT have become a boon for some of the employees who won't care of their ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: able
...et their goals and work hard for it are able able to win the medals. Thus, true success ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.6327345309 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 11.1786427146 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 28.8173652695 56% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 55.5748502994 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 16.3942115768 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 2260.96107784 44% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 218.0 441.139720559 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61467889908 5.12650576532 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 4.56307096286 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46365722767 2.78398813304 88% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 204.123752495 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52752293578 0.468620217663 113% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 705.55239521 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.22255489022 166% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.8473053892 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.6468233301 57.8364921388 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.3846153846 119.503703932 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 23.324526521 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.30769230769 5.70786347227 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.491166025815 0.218282227539 225% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.194256276062 0.0743258471296 261% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.189509144579 0.0701772020484 270% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.356666377207 0.128457276422 278% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.204953720594 0.0628817314937 326% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 14.3799401198 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 48.3550499002 149% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.197005988 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 12.5979740519 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.32208582834 85% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 98.500998004 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 12.3882235529 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.1389221557 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.9071856287 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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