The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided chart illustrates the weekly expenditures of families in a certain nation in two years, 1968 and 2018. Overall, it is evident that this country witnessed the majority in family incomes spent weekly on food category in 1968, while there was a relative equilibrium among food, housing, transport and leisure type of week expenditures in 2018.
According to the chart, in 1968, the sustenance category accounted for the majority of household budgets during the weeks surveyed, with over one-third of the total incomes. Furthermore, while only housing and clothing spending took 10 percent, other five categories accumulated around 8 percent in 1968.
Moving on to the year 2018, this year experienced a significant alteration when food wasn’t the most distribution. Household incomes were distributed equally between food, housing and leisure expenditures, with 16 percent, 19 percent, and 22 percent, respectively. However, fuel and power, as well as clothing and personal goods witnessed a substantial decline, apparently proven by the largest decrease of 5 percent in the clothing term from 10 percent in 1968 to 5 percent in 50 years later. Only household goods stayed stable in the two years examined at 8 percent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 210, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., housing and leisure expenditures, with 16 percent, 19 percent, and 22 percent, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, furthermore, however, if, so, third, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37113402062 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94410680953 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623711340206 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2363538853 43.030603864 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.25 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.25 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 5.23603664747 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131694627071 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646516444006 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645303222457 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107231956529 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0777736398269 0.0819641961636 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.2329268293 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 61.2550243902 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.