The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts compare three types of nutrients average Americans consume through three meals and snacks.

It is clear that most of the sodium and saturated fat were taken via dinner and snacks, while snacks contain the biggest proportion about added sugar intake. It is also noticeable that people tend to have relatively fewer nutrition in their breakfast time.

In charts about sodium and saturated fat, dinner contribute the largest proportion, which is 43% and 37% respectively. On contrast, breakfast contribute the smallest part about 15% compares to the whole consumption about the two nutrition mentioned before. Just beyond one fourth saturated fat and 29% sodium are intake through lunch.

Consumption about added sugar are mainly taken through snacks which reaches 42%, nearly 2 times higher than sugar intake during dinner(23%). Both lunch and breakfast are below 20%, occupying 16% and 19% respectively.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 791.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 143.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53146853147 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45807182446 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54174401038 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657342657343 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8183280411 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.875 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.082464918979 0.215688989381 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0392112771346 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576128454178 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0657693946698 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692463767927 0.0819641961636 84% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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