The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
The diagram represents various steps in the process of making cement and the process of producing concrete using cement for building purposes.
In general, there are 5 stages from the cement production process starting from crushing materials to packing cement into bags. Also, the production of concrete contains 2 steps starting from putting materials into a concrete mixer and ending with mixing materials to make concrete.
In the cement production process, the first stage begins with crushing limestone and clay into powder; the powder then moves to the mixing stage before going through the rotating heater. In the next step, the powder is ground to make cement and packed into bags.
In the first step of creating concrete, cement along with 3 other raw materials is filled into a concrete mixer. In order to make concrete, there are some requirements which only need 15% cement, 25% sand, 50% gravel, and 10% water. After that, all of the materials are mixed together to produce concrete.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... to make cement and packed into bags. In the first step of creating concrete, ce...
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Line 4, column 114, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...erials is filled into a concrete mixer. In order to make concrete, there are some ...
^^
Line 4, column 246, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... 50% gravel, and 10% water. After that, all of the materials are mixed together to produce...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, then, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11585365854 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38933376151 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55487804878 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9650437925 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.875 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297272159491 0.215688989381 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147091403218 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14911350444 0.0843802449381 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228330334544 0.15604864568 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.170734024675 0.0819641961636 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.