The graph below gives information about the percentage of people living in Australia who were born in Asia the UK and other regions

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The graph below gives information about the percentage of people living in Australia who were born in Asia, the UK, and other regions.

The given line graph shows data about the proportion of inhabitants settling down in Australia that were born in Asia, the UK and other areas between 1976 and 2011.
Overall, it is clear that while the total percentage and the portion of people coming to Australia from Asia and other parts of the world experienced an upward trend, that from the UK saw a decline over the period.
Taking a closer look, in 1976, just around 23% of people living in Australia came from other countries, which then dropped gradually until reaching just over 20% in 2001 before rising up to its peak of 25% in 2011. The proportion of people coming from other regions also witnessed a fall from around 11% in 1976 to around 8% in 1986. This figure then increased dramatically up to approximately 14% in 2006 before dropping by just about 1% by 2011.
Despite being the lowest one in 1976, at only about 3%, the percentage of people coming from Asia stably went up during the given period until becoming the highest figure, at exactly 15% at the end of the period. On the contrary, the figure for the UK, in spite of being the highest one at the beginning of the time span, underwent a considerable drop to only 5% in 2011.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, then, while, in spite of, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 33.7804878049 172% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54128440367 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37387869507 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545871559633 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.0012443813 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.428571429 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1428571429 22.9334400587 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254644459979 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116682798732 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839111001666 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167751281737 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782218686301 0.0819641961636 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.39 61.2550243902 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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