The graph below gives information about the percentage of people living in Australia who were born in Asia the UK and other regions

Essay topics:

The graph below gives information about the percentage of people living in
Australia who were born in Asia, the UK, and other regions.

The line graph illustrates the proportion of people from Asia, UK and other parts of the world, who are currently living in Australia from 1976 to 2011.

Overall, while the total figure fluctuated, the percentage of people from Asia and Other experienced an upward trend in this period. On the other hand, the data of the UK dropped significantly.

In 1976, almost 15% of people in Australia were from the United Kingdom, the highest of all countries. This rate of Others and Asia was lower, accounting for more than 10% and 3% of the population respectively. From 1976 to 1991, there was a steady growth in the figure of Asian-born, from 3% to about 5%. Whereas, that of the UK and Others dropped significantly, both to about 9%. 

At the end of the period, the proportion of Australians who were born in the UK continued to decrease and reached 5%, which was one third of that in 1976. By contrast, the population of Australians who were from Asia rocketed to 15% by 2011. During this period, the figure of Other countries reached a peak of 14% in 2006 then fell to approximately 13%.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...dropped significantly, both to about 9%.  At the end of the period, the proportion...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, third, whereas, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70466321244 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74417763386 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.518134715026 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6082262837 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.888888889 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32829356877 0.215688989381 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134326272109 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072965320991 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212189884555 0.15604864568 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476736839606 0.0819641961636 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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