Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
In today's integrating world, there is an unprecedented level of people believing that residing in a foreign country with a different language causes several problems. From my point of view, I am of the opinion that there are a barrage of downsides of living in a new country with only a language.
The first thing to notice is that the immigrants can easily encounter criminals when they show a low ability of communication. As the people have difficulties in speaking foreign language, they will be less likely to call for help or prosecute the felons. Thus, they will turn into the targets of pickpocketing, assaulting and the like. Take Russia as an example, there is a high level of crimes in this country on the foreign visitors with lower rate of defencing. As a result, this situation can trigger the danger and threat to those immigrants with low language skills.
Furthermore, people may have to suffer from a sense of alienation and homesickness after living abroad. Some people would say that when they go to another country, they can have interpreters or a certain level of language abilities to communicate on a daily basis. However, not everyone is financially capable of hiring translators or good at languages, so they cannot understand or convey their messages. As a result, misunderstanding is inevitable, followed by a feeling of being ignored and other negative moods. According to the University of People, 60% of the immigrants have reported depression and homesickness when they reside in a new country. Those mental illnesses can, without doubt, take its toll on people's daily activities and productivity.
In conclusion, I am convinced that staying abroad with foreign language can pose certain problems including the risk of being attacked and the experience of alienation and struggling.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'barrages'?
Suggestion: barrages
...w, I am of the opinion that there are a barrage of downsides of living in a new country...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, thus, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 21.0 5.60731707317 375% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 965.302439024 158% => OK
No of words: 297.0 196.424390244 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12794612795 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 3.73543355544 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03568545556 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 106.607317073 159% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569023569024 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 283.868780488 169% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.8958687367 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.785714286 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2142857143 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.28571428571 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 1.13902439024 966% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197439553852 0.215688989381 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607432082001 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466217224475 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124390540593 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285824591294 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 40.7170731707 192% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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