letter to apologize for this absence
You were absent from an important event held by the company
you work for. Write a letter to apologize for this absence. Your
letter should include:
what the event was
why the event was important
why you were absent
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to formally apologize for my absence at the company's annual retreat last week. Please allow me to elaborate on why I was not present.
I am entirely aware of the healthy teambuilding benefits the retreat provides for us at our company, and I honestly would not have missed it for anything; however, I was faced with a medical emergency. You see, my appendix ruptured the same day of the retreat, and I was immediately rushed to the hospital and operated upon within the hour. For this reason, I couldn't contact you to inform you about my plight.
please do not be concerned about my condition as the surgery went very well, and I am currently in recovery.
I hope you can understand the severity of my situation. I will be back in the office next week, and I, of course, will be present for future workshops.
Thank you for understanding,
aymen
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 361, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...pon within the hour. For this reason, I couldnt contact you to inform you about my plig...
^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Please
...you to inform you about my plight. please do not be concerned about my condition ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
honestly, however, so, well, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 745.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71518987342 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69246338454 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651898734177 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 236.7 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2611210238 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7777777778 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.216113520407 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0766984524023 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.12726935374 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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