Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is claimed that the invention of the computer can be considered a milestone in human evolution history. I completely agree with this point of view, as computers bring not only considerable improvement to our industry but also unrestricted access to knowledge.
The most noticeable contribution of the computer is that it has enabled a robotic industry, which is considerably more productive compared to our old-style one. The appearance of computers, indeed, has facilitated the development of robots and artificial intelligence, which is now greatly involved in the manufacturing process in numerous factories. In my home country Viet Nam, for instance, most assembling jobs in factories are done through the use of computers and machines, which tremendously help employers cut many costs and subsequently drives down the prices of goods. Furthermore, thanks to robots and computers, the procedure of checking goods' quality is now done more rigorously, ensuring the safety of consumers. With the popularity of computers in factories, it is safe to consider that computers have significantly changed our industry.
Furthermore, computers have offered unlimited access to information. These days, with a computer connected to the Internet, people can easily find vast resources of knowledge and material. In Vietnam, for example, there are many websites currently offering online courses carefully taught by experts for any levels, such as: Coursera, Duolingo, edX,...And it is not very uncommon for students to find class material and additional exercises through many informative platforms like Wikipedia and QandA. Therefore, there are more and more people currently learning new things on computers, which proves that this invention benefit humans in terms of accessing to knowledge.
In summary, with the development in the industry fields and the unlimited resources of knowledge, the computer definitely is one of the best inventions of the humankind. And people should continue advancing the computer in order to increasingly benefit from it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: And
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in fact, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61980830671 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.118259964 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591054313099 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.1103819839 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.307692308 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151633230342 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0551060556475 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442755674119 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105214162589 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444244608236 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.22 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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