It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree?
There exists an idea that it is more beneficial for university students to live far away from home than continue living with their mother and father. In my personal perspective, I strongly agree with this school of thought for several reasons.
To begin with, one of the most essential benefits of living outside during college is that students can form a desired virtue of independence. It is undeniable that if their parents live with them, they will try to look after and sometimes influence directly to the students’ decision. They seem to think that their children are not mature enough to decide themselves and are easily to make serious mistakes. This leads to the fact that students depend on parents’ instruction in most cases without having their opinion. Living far away from parents’ care can create more situations for students to take responsibility for their own choice.
Furthermore, instead of living at home, students tend to stay near their university or college. The geographical proximity means that they are given hundreds of opportunities to blend in with people from different cultures and backgrounds. They can participate in many extracurricular activities with their peers and thus, numerous soft skills will be enhanced. They also have to face up with more and more real-life problems which not only enrich their social knowledge but also make them more mature and decisive.
However, it should be noted that there are some risks if students choose not to live with their parents during university time. The most noticeable is about their financial condition. The majority of college students do not have fine jobs due to lack of experience and time. This leads to a problem that students struggle to deal with financial burden. They also do not ask for parents’ help as they want to be independent in every aspect in their day-to-day life.
In conclusion, despite having some drawbacks, living far away from home is more convenient for students to be more mature and independent. Parents should act as advisors, not as instructors, just to make sure their children go the right path.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sure their children go the right path.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, thus, in conclusion, in most cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10601719198 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73651119609 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538681948424 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.2533360608 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3888888889 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.449489327667 0.244688304435 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.142810706322 0.084324248473 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111138817085 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276672496313 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0809487469855 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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