It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
It is often argued that it is more advantageous to use the punishment to teach the children the difference between right and wrong directions. I completely agree with this opinion and think the punishment is an effective tool to realize the correct and an incorrect for the children.
Firstly, the punishment changes the behavior of the children. That is when the parents or the teachers use this policy with them; they force them to think before doing the things badly. For example, if the child failed in the exam because he or she did not study this exam well, then the parents would prevent him from playing their favorite game, as the result that a child would most likely study much better next time in the next attempt, he will do well.
Secondly, the punishment makes the children know the value of their actions. When they well-behaved take things seriously their parents certainly would reward them by providing whatever they like. So this method taught them the importance of their choices. For instance, if the parents or teachers grant the gift to the child who achieves the highest score in the mathematical course, this behavior will lead the student to be keener to be successful in his group.
Finally, punishment helps the children in the future to follow the instruction strictly consequently. In that case, the child who received the punishment for the delaying at his school, he would not delay on his job when he becomes an employee. Therefore the company will not apply disciplinary action for those employees who learned to follow the instructions in their childhood, Carrot and stick policy
In conclusion, the reward and punishment policy is a handy useful indispensable tool to teach the children the right and the wrong, and make disciplined persons lead their nation to the wonderful future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97058823529 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62704651717 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52614379085 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.0939387482 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.75 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6666666667 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307207533525 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120343812606 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687241905526 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174182660144 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908699662218 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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