Living in a country where you have to speak in a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems

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Living in a country where you have to speak in a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.

When living in a country requiring you to communicate in a foreign language, one may face some serious problems. In my opinion, those are social problems, relating to communication and culture, and practical problems relevant to career prospects.

In terms of social problems, speaking a foreign language can cause difficulty in communication. If one does not have a variable source of vocabulary and abilities to communicate in a different language fluently, they are lacking chances to express their ideas in a throughout way. For example, people can easily purchase goods in a market using some simple statements and questions. However, in order to make a bargain or ask for further information, they need to update their vocabulary and take time to learn the new language. Moreover, another problem is related to expressing cultural identity. People from different cultures have differences in lifestyle. Therefore, one of the easiest and fastest ways to explain to others our habits is through speaking. This also requires much effort in exposing yourself to a foreign language.
When it comes to practical problems, job opportunity is a big concern. Some companies find it irritating to hire foreign laborers because of differences in culture and language. One of the reasons is that they want to avoid any argument that may happen due to miscommunication, especially for those whose foreign languages are not good enough. However, in some cases, foreign laborers are acceptable because of the lower payment fee.

In conclusion, living in a foreign language country may result in many social and practical problems. For those who are not good at communicating, updating their skills is the foremost way to adapt to the new culture.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 261, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a throughout way" with adverb for "throughout"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... lacking chances to express their ideas in a throughout way. For example, people can easily purchas...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, in some cases

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28417266187 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00649926567 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568345323741 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6544364646 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8125 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273591817552 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0854571364592 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908775253872 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167266348929 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0575939586552 0.056905535591 101% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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