A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not well-managed.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world? Do you think that the benefits of tourism outweigh its drawbacks?
Many places in the world depend on tourism as a main source of income. Unluckily, it can cause serious trouble if it's not managed correctly. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of tourism.
The reason why tourism is extremely important in most countries is that it widely helps the country's economy. Tourists would always spend a lot of money while visiting a country to satisfy themselves. For instance, they'd spend money on hotels, transportation, and when visiting some places. Another advantage of tourism is that it provides a wide range of job opportunities. As it demands a lot of workers in that field. This will result in a decrease in the rate of unemployment. Another alternative, tourism can promote cultural exchange. Tourism isn't just about sightseeing, it's about cross-cultural connections. This will promote global peace.
However, poor management of tourism can cause a terrible outcome. Main tourist destinations in a country become overcrowded. This might result in many illegal activities such as destroying ancient buildings. The more crowded a place is, the more polluted it gets. Not only because of the use of means of transport but also throwing garbage everywhere and not caring about the environment. Also, it will result in some criminal activities. Some tourists carry valuable things most of the time, becoming an attractive target for thieves. However, proper management can cause all of these problems to vanish.
To sum up, although tourism can cause serious problems such as destruction and increasing in crime rate, it has a huge positive impact on the country as it provides job opportunities. In my opinion, the advantages of tourism can outweigh the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24727272727 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99247320251 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574545454545 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2958424086 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.5909090909 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5 20.7667163134 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.72727272727 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279823766357 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787547068774 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852482503746 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187696260947 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07144691168 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.28 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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