In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.
To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?
Long life is such a blessing that God has given us and having an elderly in our society is like having a living cheated machine to consult any problems that we face in our lives. Although some people think that an aging population creates problems for governments. In this essay, I would like to discuss the merit and demerit of this issue.
On the positive side, elderly really like a living cheated machine to tackle our daily problems or maybe the hardest one in your life. We call it an elderly when people have reached more than 60 years of their life. And all 60 years of their life are full of experiences that can not be bought with money. For that reason we can tackle our problem by consulting with them about our problem. For instance we can consult with them when we have an argument with our spouse or how to raise a child correctly or maybe when choosing our career path. Having an elderly people in your society can really help you.
However, when we talk about the aging population like a double-edged sword there are disadvantages of this issue specially for governments. Aged populations have an issue about their physique, not like young people, elderly have a weaker body due to aging and cannot do some activities like young people. If it happens there is some task that can be done. It is not really good for a country that has a more aged population because the activity became low and as a result the number of productivity of the country decreased. Another thing is elderly cannot do their activity alone, they need help from another. For some countries elderly become responsible so they have to support them without having any income for them.
To sum up, I agree that there are advantages to having an elderly people in our society because they really help us with the experiences of their lives. Though there is a disadvantage of an aged population like they cannot give you anything except their life experiences for governments they have to spare they expanse for this population.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 306, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, really, so, another thing, for instance, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69382022472 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45046075708 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.457865168539 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8694808406 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2941176471 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9411764706 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76470588235 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3169210735 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123931901702 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110992713822 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215956888867 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358742679766 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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