In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The general consensus is that excessively high wages should be permitted and given to employees for the sake of their countries. By contrast, others hold that this movement should be put to a halt by governments and workers should merely be paid at a limited degree. This essay will highlight the rationale of the two above opinions and my endorsement to the latter one
To begin with, it is transparent in the former view point that a huge amount of salaries can engender more likelihood of the employees experiencing higher job satisfaction, thus enhancing productivity and their commitment to their jobs. To clarify, a decent salary not only acts as a reward for the workers after a period of time fulfilling their roles but also a significant impetus to motivate them to work harder and harder. For example, if teachers are well-paid, they can feel a sense of responsibility to be more committed to teaching pupils to deserve what they earn, which yields more quantity of well-educated students, thus assisting them to contribute to enriching the country,if any, irresponsibility of teachers can occur, which poses many threats to the quality of lessons and classes.
However, I subscribe to the latter viewpoint as putting a limit on an amount of money paid for workers can magically obviate income inequality in the society. By virtue of the fact that if some people are given extremely high in certain companies, which is not the case to the others, disparity can be envisaged to take place. As a result, the individuals who are unable to receive that privilege are more likely to feel they are getting a raw deal, which causes them to move to other premises in which they are more well-paid. What's more, that this movement persists can inevitably expand the gap between the haves and the have-nots, which gives rise to the acceleration of crime rate to achieve fame and fortune. In contrast, if restrictions on wages are enforced, societies can totally witness a reserve trend.
In conclusion, although these two viewpoints are all justifiable, I remain convinced that the latter one is more capable of bettering the society
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97206703911 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87500059367 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567039106145 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.9765134678 49.4020404114 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.818181818 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5454545455 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132278769418 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493151693661 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374108708888 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726827673077 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354783044073 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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