In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Although it is commonly considered that a great high level of salaries which is earned by few people in many countries is economically beneficial, other people think that governments ought to limit the maximum wages. In my opinion, I think it is better if maximum wages laws are implemented by governments.
On the one hand, some people think earning a high level of salaries by few people is useful for country’s economy. This opportunity could attract wealthy investors from other countries to invest in countries with no limitation for salaries. In other words, the more investments occur, the more products will be produced, and consequently the economy stands a better chance to thrill through the boost in gross domestic products (GDP). Furthermore, as people, we do not like boundaries. Therefore, no boundaries on earning money could play a role as an incentive for young people and encourage them to work rather than to pursue education which potentially decreases the unemployment rate, and as a result, aids to develop the economy.
On the other hand, governments are responsible for controlling the highest wages earned by few people in the country, according to some and I agree. People who are living in these countries are less ambitious and find what they own satisfying. For example, the experience of Nordic countries shows, implementation of maximum wage laws effectively leads to a privileged life with a high level of life expectancy and satisfaction. In addition, monitoring the monetary status of individuals and implementing strict laws against the great high salaries earned by a few percent of society, hardly do corruption and money laundering occur in countries with the government which implement strict monetary policies against extreme high wages.
In conclusion, while it is thought by some that strongly earning a high level of salaries can be accounted as a benefit for the economy, in my view, limiting laws should be implemented on extremely high salaries by governments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
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Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...ink earning a high level of salaries by a small number of people is useful for the country’s econ...
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Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...controlling the highest wages earned by a small number of people in the country, according to som...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, in my view, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1951951952 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99477250489 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513513513514 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.8313514808 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.166666667 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.75 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.6666666667 7.06120827912 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428196038606 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160878233851 0.084324248473 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134673252339 0.0667982634062 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271666203925 0.151304729494 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287100502893 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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