Many museums charge for admission while others are free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
Museums have great historical, aesthetic and educational value, so it is suggested that people should go to museums more often. However, we have to pay in order to visit some museums, while others are completely for free. On the one hand, the number of people visiting museums are affected. Clearly, most people prefer free stuff, so they might hesitate to pay money to get into museum, thus museums that do not have fees to get in will have better turn out. But it is quite hasty to assert that having entrance fees is no good. This, on the other hand, have more benefits than drawbacks.
As mentioned, museums have considerable value, so it is reasonable to charge for admission. Museums need money to maintain the artifacts in pristine condition, so that they can better present what remain as well as better deliver historical or aesthetic value. Money is also used for opening exhibitions and provide salary for workers in museums. Therefore, money is essential to run the work and keep everything in control.
Another advantage of having entrance fees is that by paying money to get in, visitors and tourists will have a sense of responsibility and they will make good use of time inside the museums. They will bear in mind that they do not come here just to take a quick glance; this studying the artifacts, remains or pictures more carefully and trying not to break anything. As a result, the education and aesthetic purpose is better delivered.
In conclusion , charging for admission has both pros and cons, however, as an individual, I would like to take a more balanced position, which is entrance fee is a must. Also free-of-charge museums may attract more visitors, people should pay money to keep the museums working and enjoy their value better. Paying money to get in seems to have far more advantages than not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85031847134 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58874047048 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56050955414 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8841952637 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1875 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25854393315 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882467393921 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748487819778 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159939988811 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0821316422641 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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