More and more people want to own items, such as cars, clothing and other things, that are made by famous brands. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
I will consider how this view brings several notable advantages, which I will elucidate in the following paragraphs.
Regarding the merits, we must acknowladge that to fullfiling human pleasure and happiness, the quality assurance, either primary or secondary needs are being linked respectively with its value. Nowdays, chosing Famous brand being popular option in sociaty due to branded brand often elevate their high-quality standard and guarentee customer with certain well-services such as precise stitching and high-grade fabrics. Furthermore, a form of signify style status and sense of belonging to several lifestyle, wearing fancy things can boost self-confidence. For example, Skena is an intriguing Indonesia slang which, expanding the canter stage of social media and grup’s lifestyle for young people.
By contrast, we must elucidate the various demerits of this issue that branded items usually come with a high price tag, making them inaccessible for many people particullary in middle and lower classes. A french high fashion house, Hermes, it is known for its quality carftman and utilize of luxury material as well as its marketing strategy exclusivity and scarcity. Moreover, the emphasis on owning famous items create social Pressure and status anxiety. Currently, Buy Now Pay Later (BNPL) model has been increasing demand and become worse problem in worldwide, in order of many apps in mobile phone provide an easy acces to drive people become extravagant.
In conclusion, while some may perceive pontentially drawback to certain respect, I would argu that the benefits of this possessing with luxurious objects can be substantially significant. Those include obtaining the high-quality and uplifting confidence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 490, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun lifestyle seems to be countable; consider using: 'several lifestyles'.
Suggestion: several lifestyles
... style status and sense of belonging to several lifestyle, wearing fancy things can boost self-co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67816091954 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92085227103 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.72030651341 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7764338166 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.727272727 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7272727273 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4545454545 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0856087749105 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0300187845227 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415013590775 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0385597358387 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388885958835 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.95 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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