Recent research has shown that business meetings and training are increasingly taking place online. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?
It has been a scientific journal that corporate meetings and trainings are progressively being conducted online time to time. There are several merits and demerits from this issue which I will elaborate in the following paragraph.
Considering the benefits, telecommuting, based on research survey, may offer affordable cost of company expenses nowadays. Proved by Gartner, almost 60% company’s funding shifts to online channels and social advertising. Along with greater time efficiency, conducting online meeting can support business growth through eliminating logistics fund including conference venues, food and beverages and also travel. Furthermore, flexible-time arrangements of virtual meetings can accelerate greater individual’s productivity. Instead of working overtime, probation workers can create an ideal working environment while fulfilling high professional standards (personal and professional integrity). Based on Indeed Career Guide, probation period assists them to adjust new responsibilities and meets the expectations of the role.
In contrast, we should emphasize some drawbacks of this issue that online meetings may incur extra support, not to mention provider trouble and power outage. Seemingly, company should consider preparing not only video conference software but also advanced communication tools with safe security system reducing cross-collaboration problems and eluding cyber hacking. As happened to US government that zoom-bombing disrupted a House Committee meeting by hurling insults against participants. Moreover, remote employees may have poor career progression, surveyed by Tech Republic, which over 40% participants contribute less. Considering that, remote workers somewhat overlook their duties, and thus hardly meeting a chance to showcase their skills to reassure their professionalism.
In summary, the positives of using virtual meetings and trainings may help saving company’s budget from operational cost and engaging individual in ethical principles at work. However, the negatives of teleconference are defective technical support and poor individual’s career path.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 368, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ion problems and eluding cyber hacking. As happened to US government that zoom-bom...
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Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to save' or 'save'.
Suggestion: to save; save
...virtual meetings and trainings may help saving company’s budget from operational cost ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, while, in contrast, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1847.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.3470790378 5.12529762239 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22883277067 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.711340206186 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1754910176 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.133333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140970823814 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434710217679 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367511631472 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844019652858 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269119391275 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.55 12.4159519038 157% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.47 8.58950901804 134% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 368, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ion problems and eluding cyber hacking. As happened to US government that zoom-bom...
^^
Line 7, column 76, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to save' or 'save'.
Suggestion: to save; save
...virtual meetings and trainings may help saving company’s budget from operational cost ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, while, in contrast, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1847.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.3470790378 5.12529762239 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22883277067 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.711340206186 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1754910176 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.133333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.53333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140970823814 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434710217679 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367511631472 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0844019652858 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269119391275 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.55 12.4159519038 157% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.47 8.58950901804 134% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.