Online shopping sites such as e-Bay, Lazada and Shopee should be banned.
Do you agree?
Shopping is an activity necessary among people. Currently, shopping is enhanced to be accessible anytime and anywhere. However, online shopping such as eBay, Lazada and Shopee will waste more money and should be blocked. It is disagreed that online shopping should be banned because of easy access and promotion.
First of all, shopping online is accessible easily and fastly. Especially, customers who want to order products do not go to stores, instead of using a phone they can get anything with online shopping. In addition, the sellers just put the product down on an online shopping platform, so that customers will get it fastly. For example, Shopee provides many things which are sold. Moreover, the customers choose and pay the stuff ,and it immediately sends to the customer. In brief, online shopping is better than normal shopping due to easy access.
Furthermore, customers can receive more promotions such as discounts and buy one get one. Fortunately, it will encourage customers to choose online shopping more than normal shopping. In contrast, the seller can release the product bigger until overseas by using online shopping. Thus, promotion obsesses people to buy in online shopping.
In conclusion,based on the reasons above, online shopping should not be banned because it is usable easily ,and there are many promotions inside. It is suggested the customer should check the integrity of the seller first before they pay for the products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, moreover, so, thus, for example, in addition, in brief, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1235.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27777777778 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67226633743 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5646257684 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.1875 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.625 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31447219579 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110226722355 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931653853124 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206897277929 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108294801382 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.75 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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