In the past, most people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smartphones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
Nowadays, with the aid of technology, more and more people are in favor of teleworking rather than being in the office. In this essay, I would like to discuss both benefits and drawbacks of this trend.
On the one hand, it is true that there are several positive impacts when it comes to remote working. In society’s perspective, remote working employers could save much of the time and the cost of commuting. In doing so, this working style would bring about many positive social and environmental changes, such as fewer traffic accidents and the reduction of vehicle emission. In individual’s perspective, working from home provides a balance between work and personal life in daily schedules for employed adults. They are more likely to be able to choose what to put into their hours which perfectly fits them. In this way, teleworkers would not be overwhelmed by their jobs and also spare them for family and interests.
On the other hand, alongside the upsides, working from home also has considerable downsides. The transition to telework sometimes comes along with a lack of adequate technology and equipment which consequently reduces workers’s productivity. Some of these facilities, namely printer and fax, are essential to certain jobs but only available in conventional offices which would affect the way the perform the jobs. Also, the restricted interaction with colleagues is another factor contributing to the decreased productivity. It is true that teleworkers have less motivation, as they have to manage their responsibility without any support and encouragement from their co-workers. For instance, working individually rather in a group might be hard to meet deadline and complete project on time.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that teleworking has certain plus points but it associates with many problems. Personally, I think this new working form has not reshaped the culture of work yet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'less traffic'?
Suggestion: less traffic
...cial and environmental changes, such as fewer traffic accidents and the reduction of vehicle ...
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... and the reduction of vehicle emission. In individual’s perspective, working from ...
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...onal offices which would affect the way the perform the jobs. Also, the restricted interact...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...deadline and complete project on time. In conclusion, there is no doubt that te...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29641693811 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97201238945 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609120521173 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8286469982 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.625 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1875 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229454735482 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0691249689694 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533578356799 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141544901896 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301763919382 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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