people should follow the customs and traditions when people start to live in a new country .To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The ancestors have once said: "When in Rome, do as the Roman do". In order not to be lost in a new environment, everyone should adapt to new customs and habits, which expresses their respect for the country. Therefore, I completely agree with this view and shall put forward my argument to support my opinion in the following paragraph
First of all, having difficulty in adjusting to new traditions is unavoidable because there are a lot of new rules being different from which you were born. You might be faced with culture shock and other art problems. For example, many people in America will feel uncomfortable and seem as though you are impolite whenever you stand closer to them. On contrary, Vietnamese people feel that It expresses your friendly to each other. Besides, when occupying a new place, If you become sociable as well as being shy of practicing, It will be a challenge for you to integrate with new social. That can prevent you from representing your feeling and language. Therefore, you can only understand and live with them if you learn about their traditional ability
Moreover, following new local customs and habits will help not only broaden your relationship network but also enhance your horizon about cultural identity. From that, you can get a deeper insight into a local custom by immersing yourself in the local community. Furthermore, you can your respect for the country, the local, which will make you impressed in the eye of global companion and also represent traditional morality of your nation
In conclusion, newcomers must follow a new custom and tradition when you settle down a new country while you also considerate gaining many cultural to avoid being a culture shock
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00347222222 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69955620138 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590277777778 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.291982787 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1818181818 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1818181818 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30222207769 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107134471862 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472389919994 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18237096167 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049455361121 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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