Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes, and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Many of people say that give freedom to children to choose about everything like what their want to eat, what their like to use, etc. it is make children become the selfish person. Howerver many of people say that it is good to give the children freedom to make decisions in their lives. In this essay I will elaborate my answer why people agree or disagree, and I will give my opinion about it.
On the other hand, children is still need guiden from their parents because they are still to young and do not know about anything. Bacause of that, if we give excessive freedom to children it makes them do not know about the limitation. As a proof, there was a kid in my neighboor who can buy anything what he likes and what he want because of his parents have a lot of money and want their children happy, meanwhile because of this treatment it is made their children become arogant in front of another children in the school and neighboor.
However, the other hand people with thoughts that there is should be restriction to give freedom to children believe that parents should be take control about the children and just give a little bit option to children to choose, such as they can give the option to their children about the toys that their wants or tv programs that their want to watch.
In my opinion, there is should be limitation about this. Because children is still to young to be given a freedom, they still need guidens from their parents.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 38, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'needed'.
Suggestion: needed
.... On the other hand, children is still need guiden from their parents because they ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 329, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
... buy anything what he likes and what he want because of his parents have a lot of mo...
^^^^
Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: IS_SHOULD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
...er hand people with thoughts that there is should be restriction to give freedom t...
^^
Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...trol about the children and just give a little bit option to children to choose, such as t...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 22, Rule ID: IS_SHOULD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
...r want to watch. In my opinion, there is should be limitation about this. Becaus...
^^
Line 4, column 35, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean ''?
...ch. In my opinion, there is should be limitation about this. Because children is still t...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, while, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50566037736 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2353004661 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464150943396 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.2729972526 49.4020404114 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.4 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24905365476 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110872967821 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589487165677 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16295760008 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059455157715 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 38, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'needed'.
Suggestion: needed
.... On the other hand, children is still need guiden from their parents because they ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 329, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
... buy anything what he likes and what he want because of his parents have a lot of mo...
^^^^
Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: IS_SHOULD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
...er hand people with thoughts that there is should be restriction to give freedom t...
^^
Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...trol about the children and just give a little bit option to children to choose, such as t...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 22, Rule ID: IS_SHOULD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
...r want to watch. In my opinion, there is should be limitation about this. Becaus...
^^
Line 4, column 35, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean ''?
...ch. In my opinion, there is should be limitation about this. Because children is still t...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, while, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50566037736 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2353004661 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.464150943396 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.2729972526 49.4020404114 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.4 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24905365476 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110872967821 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589487165677 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16295760008 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059455157715 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.