Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Reacting to an awful cirmcumtance can be various. Some individuals prefer to accept unlucky situation, poverty or unemployment for example. However, some believe it is better to escape from bad luck and turn it into win-win situation. This essay, I will examine both views and deliver my perspective why I think improving such situation is better.
Religion plays an significant role on how people should react to some particular situations. Religion as a believe can decide its followers about what to do and what to not do. Take islam as an example, Alquran, as the holy book of muslims, regulates how muslims should react towards poverty by praying and being positive. Therefore, some people might react to such situation because of religion background as their preferences.
Ambition and creativity are the reason for those who are hardly accepting unlucky situation. Ambition can lead people to stay in line and focus, meanwhile, creativity can solve any problem as well as change drawbacks into well prospect opportunity. For instance, a lot of bussiness are forced to close when pandemic hit indonesia couple months ago. Neverhteless, some of them build new busniess calls ‘go vaksin’ an application that will provide vaksin delivery for people without even leaving their houses. This application now has been used by over than 1.2 million people in Indonesia, and has hired over than 100,000 homeless people in indonesia.The more people adapt to such situation, the flexible they are to overcome that.
In conclusion, I belive that improving such situation into something which can give us advantages is better than just accepting it and believing in destiny.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1409.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25746268657 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80399213785 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641791044776 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7307660515 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.642857143 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257183355119 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084526229008 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771014473528 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17433510752 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676706280442 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.