Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school.
This is a fact that education is required for being a responsible citizen of the country. Children must be educated because they are the future of any nation. Some people opine that it is beneficial to teach children at home but according to my perception children must go to school for studying properly.
I support the idea that parents must let their offsprings go to school. Firstly, educational institutes provide a perfect environment for the students, where children can concentrate fully on their study which leads to a better performance of students in the examination. Most importantly, schools are run not only to educate the children but also for their holistic development as along with study children do numerous other activities in the school which boost their confidence level as well as keep them calm and undisturbed. For example, the school staff organizes several activities for the children such as painting competitions, singing and dancing competition, and sports activities. Secondly, children can learn how to communicate with the people around and with their friends. If the children will go to school then they can meet new people as they interact with teachers, classmates and learn many new things which would widen the horizons of knowledge of the children. Finally, when children go to school they learn how to live in discipline because discipline in life is the prerequisite for being an ideal student and then an ideal citizen.
However, the home environment is different than schools. No matter that home is the place where children learn their first mother language but there are some skills which can be learnt by communicating with other people and to educate children in a better way schools are best.
Conclusion, although home is the place where children get the first lesson of life yet for studying patents must choose the schools where children learn a lot of skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1050955414 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75947098349 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522292993631 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9707890721 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.307692308 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.412379871863 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15908614708 0.084324248473 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102636816025 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270761516919 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555879846481 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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