Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news. However, others believe that they can learn news better through other media.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Many people’s opinions differ on what the best source for news is. While it is argued that newspapers could be the optimal method to gather information, I firmly believe that the other media such as television, radio or social networking websites are more beneficial for readers.
On the one hand, newspapers associated with keeping up with current events could benefit readers rather than the other media, due to their own safety and formality. Without any doubt, the amount of news in newspapers is thoroughly edited before being released, helping people avoid spams. In fact, people are overwhelmed by the massive quantity of events daily; thus, choosing a reliable news source like newspapers will save their time to do other things. In addition, it should be noted that many images and words in newspapers are safe and appropriate for their readers regardless of age as they are eliminated blood, violent images or scary stories. If people frequently use the other media platforms to seek news, they can suffer from terrible experiences since creepy stuff is not filtered before being posted.
On the other hand, there are various good reasons why the other means of media, particularly television, radio or even social networking platforms, are advocated to learn news, one of which is their own high speed. There is no denying that people no longer find papers that can convey and update breaking news as rapidly as the other media platforms. Another key reason is that people who use social networking sites to get news could directly express their emotions by sharing, commenting, and using emojis. For example, Facebook, a social networking platform, makes it easy to post and search all kinds of news, as well as, share their users’ feelings about specific news in the community.
In conclusion, I completely agree that people should use other media such as television or social platforms to gather news instead of reading newspapers. In terms of convenience, the other means of media are far more predominant than newspapers, both traditional and e-newspapers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, well, while, even so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15976331361 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64224870888 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57100591716 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.4555379935 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.153846154 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296296351926 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112411634026 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412510238271 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17984178138 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028583692975 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.