Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
While some people believe that zoos play an important role in protecting wild animals, others feel that keeping animals locked up in such places is cruel and unnecessary. From my perspective, I strongly agree with the idea that animals should not be kept in zoos and that zoos should be shut down.
On the one hand, zoos are no doubt a haven for the wildlife, especially for animals on the Red List. First and foremost, zoos can help to preserve endangered animals by keeping them safe from poachers and such other threats as habitat destruction and overexploitation. Some zoos also run breeding programs in order to facilitate animals’ mating and reproduction as well. Secondly, by keeping animals in zoos, they tend to provide urban dwellers with opportunities to be educated about rare species. As a result, this can help to raise awareness amongst the public in order to protect animals in particular and the environment in general.
On the other hand, while the aforementioned ideas may be true to a certain extent, I believe that zoos are unnecessary for the following host of reasons. To begin with, wild animals are caged in a limited space and fed by humans while they long for a natural way of life. Therefore, many of them might suffer from boredom, confinement, and gradually losing instincts as well. In the long run, such individuals in zoos might be negatively affected physically and mentally. Lions fed with dead or frozen meat, for example, are prone to lose their foraging and hunting instincts. Furthermore, in many zoos, animals are being mistreated as they are often provided with insufficient food and medical care, which has so far caused many animals in zoos to die due to starvation and diseases. And the most likely drawback to consider is that many governments might see zoos as an opportunity to make money. To be more specific, a multitude of wild animals are exhibited and perform to entertain and attract visitors to the zoos. Many people claim that humans have no moral rights to monetize rare animals’ appearance and performance.
In conclusion, though some zoos may have some positive impacts on the conservation of some certain animal species, overall, I think they are cruel places and do more harm than good.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ducated about rare species. As a result, this can help to raise awareness amongst...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, in general, in particular, no doubt, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1877.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95250659631 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7719935383 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548812664908 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0656765476 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.411764706 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2941176471 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7647058824 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332847539259 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105615388868 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736357399956 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228741573427 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896470395932 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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