Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
These days, it is commonly believed that living in a horizontal city is the best, while the opponents of this idea prefer to settle in a vertical city. While there are benefits to residents dwelling in low-rise construction, I would argue that cities with skyscrapers and high-rise buildings offer more advantages.
On the one hand, a horizontal city has its own notable merits based on a few financial and privacy reasons. First and foremost, if residents live in a private house, they could not only save a great deal of money for building services but also have a sense of ownership. Therefore, they are likely to get opportunities to decorate or renovate homes according to their preference. Secondly, it is widely acknowledged that dwellers in houses may evacuate quickly from emergency cases such as fire, construction collapse, and avoiding elevator accidents. Especially, people settling there would be able to flee without much help from rescue teams.
On the other hand, it seems to me that living in a vertical city is much more advantageous. The first benefit is that vertical areas tend to resolve the issue of accommodation shortage due to the population explosion in metropolitan centers. By maximizing land usage, such areas could preserve more space for parks, shopping malls, and playgrounds as well. Furthermore, it is much safer for residents to live in an apartment in a tall building that offers full security services and video surveillance. Thanks to being available 24/7, these technological devices are inclined to protect people from external factors such as robbers, kidnappers, stalkers, and so forth.
In conclusion, from my perspective, while living in an attached or semi-detached house does have some benefits, the aforementioned advantages of living in a city with skyscrapers make living in a vertical city a better choice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22742474916 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02892621608 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61872909699 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8263155202 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.230769231 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229981695077 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759211393324 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856115088019 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151939425415 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677912728968 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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