Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve this situation?
Many young individuals are moving away from rural areas to settle in urban environments, resulting in a demographic shift where only the elderly remain in the countryside. This essay will first discuss the biggest problems caused by the idea of leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns and then will suggest the most viable solutions
There are a lot of problems caused by youths moving to the big city for a better life, leaving the old people in the countryside. First things first, most employment in the countryside involves manual labor like agricultural work, and this can be difficult for older people to manage as it is far more suited to fit and healthy young adults. Furthermore, when they move to cities and towns the population will increase, so there maybe inflation as that prices of food and shelter will increase and there will be job cuts leading to a fall in standards of living, and by this the opposite of what young adults was expecting happens. Moreover, sometimes youths will feel lonely in towns as that it will be hard to communicate with the elderly and their friends
On the other hand, the solutions to these problems are quite simple. Firstly, if you have prospects for a good job in the city and you are confident that you are a specialist, then you don’t have to worry about the financial component, and your living standards at all. In addition, providing social support networks is crucial to retaining young people and promoting well-being in rural areas. This can involve creating community centers, organizing social events, and engaging with older residents through mentorship programs or volunteer opportunities.
In a nutshell, young people departing from the countryside to settle in cities and towns can let them live a better life. This decision have a lot of problems, like lack of communication, and higher prices, but there are possible solutions like supporting social networks by the government, and also young adults could work hard to be able to find a stable job in the big cities .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: has
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...e to find a stable job in the big cities .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, as to, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94782608696 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70615472835 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530434782609 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.3079596737 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.7 106.682146367 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5 20.7667163134 166% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346240803769 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125829895106 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956465061761 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203209985222 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600058372587 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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