In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.
Why is this the case?
What can be done about this problem?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Albeit the development in the agricultural sector, a lot of people worldwide still suffer from hunger. The underlying factors and some remedies to counteract this issue will be mentioned in my writing.
One of the origins of this concern is due to climate change when extreme weather conditions such as prolonged droughts and severe storms substantially affect harvest in agriculture. This tends to make production deteriorate then might bring about the shortage of food provided to people. In addition, a further serious root owning to the impact of wars or conflicts on agriculture. These violent chaoses should perhaps practically dilute the crops, prevent farmers from producing and delivering their agricultural produce to people around the globe. This range of causes inevitably happens in developing countries such as Viet Nam and leads to long-term consequences.
The way to curb this crisis should be to build early natural disaster prediction systems to punctually warn people about the forthcoming disaster events. This tends to help farmers anticipate and apply some methods with the use of techniques and practical experiences to save the crops. Another remedy is that governments and authorities would regulate the laws to penalize people for triggering turbulence. Besides, officials may well lessen the challenge of food shortage by providing social welfare to people who endure the famine as the effects of lack of food.
In conclusion, global people still put up with the lack of food provided might due to the impact of climate change and social riots. And methods to address these problems are to prepare for severe weather and support farmers by the power of authorities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, may, so, still, then, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38028169014 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8026222595 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612676056338 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.8886593195 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.142857143 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190072340157 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584473939675 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0384099401145 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939295146239 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557689096515 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.