Today people are living longer, so they should work longer. Do you agree or disagree?
The population aging has been a contentious issue in recent years, especially since the implication for pension issues from national policies are increasingly exhausted. I agree with the majority of people saying that people at the current retirement age still need to work more to help balance the nation’s development policy.
It is easily to said that the more ages people have the more experience they gain, hence they can do many things that benefit the country. For example, in the field of doing scientific research, acquiring knowledge to continue research, creating new things is extremely convenient and brings unpredictable results. Typically the scientist Edison, if he lived any longer, could create many wonders for humanity. Assuming that the retirement age increase by five to ten years, progress in all aspects will improve markedly. Therefore, having a wide range of experience will greatly help the development of all sectors of the country.
A matter of great concern and controversy is that the pension response is becoming increasingly difficult due to the rapidly growing population. Therefore, the majority of people in the world agree with the idea that it is necessary to increase the working-age in response to the aging population. We are no longer have to face up with the problem about accommodation and food for all people, hence the sooner we solve this problem, the easier it is for us to improve the problem of increasing poverty.
In conclusion, we will have to face up with the problem of population aging, so improving the retirement age for people to work longer will significantly reduce the country’s financial concerns.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28996282528 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95263718762 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550185873606 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2882771573 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.363636364 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4545454545 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36363636364 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176769692566 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645540059111 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590387361256 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110575233061 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273445155327 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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