Do you agree or disagree with the following statement
In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than today.
It goes without saying that in this progressive and sophisticated world, where we live, human being have been preoccupied with several methods and tools and machines in order to have easy kind of living. In this kind of thought, most people hold the view that in future there will be fewer cars in use, while other people who stay in other side and claim this kind of view is not correct, from my perspective, I am inclined to the later opinion and the reasons to substantiate my viewpoint are elaborated upon hereunder.
First and most profound reason for this assert is that, World population is increasing constantly and continuously, this is by default leading to produce more cars in factories due to individual's needs and desires. In fact people increasing and car producing are not mutually exclusive. To put it in other words, they are in close relation with each other. people need to translating to their particular places such as working place, universities, sport clubs, and etc, consequently they should use their own cars to achieve their requires.
The second reason for this is that, most people prefer use their individual cars rather than public translation. It can be seen from the fact that, because in this busy world people usually do not have enough time and they usually are in hurry, as a result they avoid to use public translation. A personal example can drive this fact and notion to home. While I was in university as a senior student, I used to go to university by bus in order to save some money. But I had usually delay to achieve ma classes, so I stopped using bus. Had I not used the bus, I would not be late.
In conclusion, having the aforementioned reasons into account, I do believe that, in future not only the cars number will not decrease, but also it will increase.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, second, so, while, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 318.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70125786164 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65028677977 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553459119497 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.0349955056 48.9658058833 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.0 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 5.45110844103 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8709677419 25% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171688908741 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626720434825 0.076458572812 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373656102039 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108365131874 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226227720025 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 10.002688172 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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