It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
It would, surely, be rather critical to take any one side strongly. It is essential to keep old friends. On the other hand, it is equally important that one makes new friends and expand his circle. If making new friends means discarding old friends, than I prefer to keep old friends to making new friends. But by old friend its does not mean that you grew up together or you met on your nursery classes, it means someone you connect with.
First, old friends with whom you spends a long time together surely knows you better than one you meet today at the tea shop. It becomes so much easier for you to share problems because you do not hesitate to share with the friend you have spent a lot of time together. He will understand your choices, respect your decisions and will help having harmonious relationship without disturbance.
Furthermore, friendship is all about trust. One cannot trust a new friend with a blind eye. May be making new friends is like eating a piece of cake but if not taken care it can damage you seriously. With old friends, it is easier that you already know their natures and habits. There is a very little chances that you may engage to bad company unknowingly. With new friends this is very uncertain as you need time to understand him. There is a good chance that you may get engaged to wrong habits due to peer pressure. There are a lot of evidences that wrong peer pressure have destroyed many youths life.
On the other hand, some proponent of the theory that one should make new friends may say that its is better to make new friends than to keep old friends. One cannot fully disregard it. There may arise certain cases that one need to make new friends such as; forming organization, business etc. But old friends are equally important. As said earlier the understanding and the bonding between old friends is very strong compared to new friends, so it may be necessary to make new friends but not by discarding old friends.
Finally, i would like to conclude by adding famous saying "A friend in need is a friend indeed" which means that a friend that can help you in your hard times is a true friend. So, one should keep such friends closer. For the sake of creating new friends, it is imprudent to forget old friends.
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- Rembrandt's Portrait 73
- It is often necessary, even desirable, for political leaders to withhold information from the public. 50
- A teacher’s ability to relate well with students is more important than excellent knowledge of the subject being taught.Use specifc reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words. Do not use memorized examples 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 251, Rule ID: COMMA_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...w friends means discarding old friends, than I prefer to keep old friends to making ...
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Line 3, column 34, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'spend'
Suggestion: spend
...th. First, old friends with whom you spends a long time together surely knows you b...
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Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to have' or 'have'.
Suggestion: to have; have
...s, respect your decisions and will help having harmonious relationship without disturb...
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Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'chance'?
Suggestion: chance
...ures and habits. There is a very little chances that you may engage to bad company unkn...
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Line 5, column 595, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'youths'' or 'youth's'?
Suggestion: youths'; youth's
...wrong peer pressure have destroyed many youths life. On the other hand, some propon...
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Line 9, column 10, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... by discarding old friends. Finally, i would like to conclude by adding famous...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, so, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57701711491 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3897000823 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488997555012 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 548.1 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.2895891642 48.9658058833 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0416666667 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.04166666667 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.464903950633 0.236089414692 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153445165851 0.076458572812 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15539107035 0.0737576698707 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.305864160162 0.150856017488 203% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.160483138611 0.0645574589148 249% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 58.1214874552 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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