It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new
friends.
We will have a lot of friends during our lives. Some of them are new to us, some turn to be old friends. In my opinion, it is more important to keep our old friends than it is to make new friends.
First, old friends are results of time, which means we have been through a lot of up and downs together, and built strong trust in each other. Whenever I get into trouble， I will choose to turn to my old friends instead of new ones. For example, I am quite outgoing and willing to make friends in an new environment. After graduation from university, I came to a new city and got a new job. Because of my easygoing personality, I made a lot of new friends there in a short period of time. Everything went well till my father had a car accident, and I needed a large amount of money for surgery at that time. I could not afford to pay the bill by myself and had to borrow some from my friends, and that was when I realized I could rely more on old friends than new ones. Because of lack of trust, none of my new friends lent me money. On the contrary, all my old friends helped me get through this difficulty. I don't want to blame it on my new friends, but I still want to say that it is a longtime relationship you can rely on.
Second, old friends have spent a long time with me, and they know me better than those new friends. Therefore, we could know what others want, no matter in workplace or at school. For example, once I invited my old and new friends to my birthday party. All of them knew I was keen on reading, so they all brought me some books as a gift. While my new friends prepared some comic books that are not my type, my old friends gave me books of my favorite author, Stephen King. This imperceptible detail really touched me, and let me knew that those old friends really know who you are and what you want. That's why I still remember this episode of my birthday party.
It's true that we will have to make new friends, because we seldom stay in one place for our whole lives, and new friends will make us more comfortable in a new environment. But it is old friends that could call back your memory and those wonderful time you spent together. For me, this is much more significant than just get to know someone new. Moreover, I think people only keen on making new friends will never get the chance to have old friends because they would not be willing to keep them in their lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whenever” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
..., and built strong trust in each other. Whenever I get into trouble， I will choose to tu...
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Line 3, column 298, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...outgoing and willing to make friends in an new environment. After graduation from ...
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Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...e a lot of new friends there in a short period of time. Everything went well till my father ha...
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Line 3, column 912, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...elped me get through this difficulty. I dont want to blame it on my new friends, but...
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Line 5, column 601, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...lly know who you are and what you want. Thats why I still remember this episode of my...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, really, second, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, i think, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 82.0 43.0788530466 190% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1947.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 466.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.17811158798 4.8611393121 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64618479453 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2789305542 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452789699571 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 589.5 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.86738351254 428% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8323115879 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.125 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4166666667 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.437699284034 0.236089414692 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144426031873 0.076458572812 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138953042396 0.0737576698707 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.344308152043 0.150856017488 228% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124122823019 0.0645574589148 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 10.9000537634 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.37 8.01818996416 79% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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