It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Most of the time, we are encouraged to make new friends since it can expand our circles of friends and help us become more sociable. As far as I am concerned, I totally accede to this opinion because making sincere new friends is difficult. Besides, I lean toward to cherish my old friends since they understand me better.
Primarily, making new friends can be a touch process. For some people, making news friends can be a piece of cake since they may define friends as all new people they have met. But in my definition, friends are those who share their thoughts in their minds. They can share their secrets without any barrier. Therefore, making such friends can be difficult. Nowadays, most people are interes-related which means they care much about self-insterest. If you do anything that might bear the potential to jeopardize their interests, they can do anything to defend their interests. What I have experienced can fully illustrate my point. Several months before, I met a nice guy in the gym. I usually jog with him in the morning and we often have breakfast together. But one day I forgot my purse so I asked him to pay for me. What really disappointed me was that he rejected it immediately, claiming that the meal was too expensive. From then on, I discontinued to jogging with him because he had never treated me as a friend. Hence, from what I have went through, we can prove how difficult it is to make sincere friends.
Secondly, our old friends understand us better. From the moment when our friendship was build to now, we and our old friends must go through a lot together. We might used to play basketball together, help to relieve your burden when you are too stressed out, assuage you when you have experienced something formidable. It is because of these that we begin to know each other better, including our habits, personalities, they way we use to deal with others and so on. But new friends can never penetrate that deeply into our hearts. Therefore, since our old friends can understand us such perfectly, why not keep our old friends.
Last but not least, trying to maintain the old friendship means how much you value the friendship. If we do not cherish the friendship, we will probably lose the friendship. A prerequisite of a stable friendship is that we and our friends are all supposed to committed to the friendship and put it at high value. To do this, every detail in our lives matter. For instance, when your friend needs some help, you should always be the first one to come and assist me. In that way, both your friends and you can benefit from each other.
In conclusion, old friends tend to understand us better compared to new friends. What's more, sincere new friends are hard to obtain. Instead of starting a new friendship, why not insist in the old friendship.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, hence, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, as to, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 86.0 43.0788530466 200% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2337.0 1977.66487455 118% => OK
No of words: 497.0 407.700716846 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70221327968 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72159896747 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67429633051 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490945674044 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 686.7 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 20.6003584229 155% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5400910549 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.03125 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.53125 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 5.45110844103 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 27.0 11.8709677419 227% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279008309086 0.236089414692 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816263460505 0.076458572812 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079990660108 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195630447449 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0828444561635 0.0645574589148 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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