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Advertisements have a significant effect in our life. They can impact our progress and prosperity as we get attracted easily by advertising. Therefore, I agree that most advertisements make products seem better than they really are because businesses cares about selling and attracting special groups.
To begin with, most companies cares about selling not the quality of the products. In fact, almost in every advertisement the quality of the products is over exaggerated than what the reality is. For example, in fast food advertisements, usually we see shiny big burger that field with thick slice of meat and melted cheese. In reality we find the burger is much smaller field with thin slice of meat and little cheese. Companies usually use specific tools while shooting the advertisement that makes the product looks almost perfect. Although some products look the same in advertisements and reality, the majority of them are totally different than what appears in commercial. Thus, by all means products seem much finer in advertisements than reality.
Another reason deserved to be outlined is that most companies advertise to attract special groups like children, Indeed, they will attract their target audiences by making their products appear charming and appealing, For instance, a company that sell cookies will advertise their product to draw the attention of children as they are their target consumers. They will use a specific character that captivates the mind of youngsters and make that character enjoy their cookies. Eventually children will get attached by the advertisement and keep asking their parents to buy them the cookies. Even though some businesses care about what they advertise to their target customers, most companies advertise in-order to increase their profit regardless of how true the advertisement is. Hence, at all costs merchandise looks great in television than what they really are.
In sum, advertisements found to make the products look good and to increase the profit of businesses. Thus, it is clear that most goods seem
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: OVER_EXAGGERATED[1]
Message: Use simply 'exaggerated'.
Suggestion: exaggerated
...tisement the quality of the products is over exaggerated than what the reality is. For example, ...
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Line 5, column 647, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
... majority of them are totally different than what appears in commercial. Thus, by al...
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Line 9, column 815, Rule ID: LOOK_WATCH[2]
Message: Did you mean 'watches'?
Suggestion: watches
...ent is. Hence, at all costs merchandise looks great in television than what they real...
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Line 13, column 141, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Thus, it is clear that most goods seem
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, really, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1977.66487455 89% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37920489297 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84274739774 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519877675841 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.4169988056 48.9658058833 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.470588235 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2352941176 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 10.9000537634 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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