You have long been friend with someone. If they do something that you don’t like, should you still be friends with him or her?
Living in this world will be intolerable if we are alone and feel a little bit isolated. Because we tend to be social, we have been trying to become friends with people, such as our classmates, our neighbors, etc. Since elementary school, we have learned how to make friends and bring up a subject for discussion. Sometimes we create enjoyable moments together, and other times, our friend annoys us by doing something wrong. It has happened to us that our friend does something with which we disagree, and we become angry that why he/she does it. But what can we do in this situation? Should we let this friendship fall apart? Not only are there various people with dissimilar characteristics, but also it is possible that our friends do something good that we don’t like in a misguided way. As a result, whether my old friend does something that is not my favorite, my opinion about him/her will not change. In the following paragraphs, I will shed light on my reasons for this viewpoint.
In this world, finding two people who think the same as each other is nearly impossible. Despite having the same genetic makeup, twins have different personalities. Even everybody can improve their attributes, which means that the personality of a person is not stable over time. Therefore, we have made friends with numerous people who have their own attributes incompatible with ours. For example, during my university years, I met a lot of people who came from different cultures and other family situations. They did a lot of things that were very odd in my opinion, and I learned ethical things that I had not previously seen. At the beginning of my studying, It was tough for me to adapt to their character, but after a short period of time, I could not stay away from them, and we have had enduring friendships. In consequence, expecting our friends to behave the manner that we must necessarily like is immoral and illogical.
Whether or not we like something, it probably can be right and moral. Because we can not claim that we have not ever made a mistake, we can not say that something is certainly good or not. Even though something benefits us, we disagree with it by mistake. My friend probably believes that something is true, but at first glance, I think that it is incorrect. After debating about it, my friend convinces me that it is useful, which has happened several times for me. For instance, during my high school years, I wanted to prepare for an entrance exam for the universities, but I could not concentrate and did not prefer to study for a long time. At that time, I had an old friend who, most of the time, was at home and was studying. I was upset by him because he would not like to go out together. Instead, he made me study more seriously. After I was accepted to my favorite university, I believed that it was such a bad fault that I was angry with my friend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... intolerable if we are alone and feel a little bit isolated. Because we tend to be social,...
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Line 1, column 774, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a misguided way" with adverb for "misguided"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ds do something good that we don’t like in a misguided way. As a result, whether my old friend doe...
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Line 2, column 732, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...t to their character, but after a short period of time, I could not stay away from them, and w...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'Whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: Whether
...ssarily like is immoral and illogical. Whether or not we like something, it probably can be r...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, i think, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.0286738351 218% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 101.0 43.0788530466 234% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2378.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 516.0 407.700716846 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60852713178 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76609204519 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6618737349 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 744.3 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 23.0 9.59856630824 240% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.86738351254 482% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.39928795 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9285714286 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.10714285714 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213698139743 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640208929827 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556498139858 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153657763935 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448929311248 0.0645574589148 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 86.8835125448 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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