In order to stay healthy, many people tend to exercise. Some people tend to exercise individually such as running and riding bicycles, etc. Some people tend to participate in group exercises such as team sports. Which one do you prefer, why?
Generally, physical activities are crucial in human being’s life. There is an old quotation in Azerbaijan that “helthy mind is in healthy body”. In this regard, it is highly suggested that every human should allocate at least 15 minutes of his daily time to exercise. Some people are on the opinion that training alone is better that group work. However, I personally prefer group exercising. In the following paragraphs, I will elucidate my most convincing reasons.
Fisrt and foremost, without shadow of doubts, group activities increase people’s social skills like communication. Participating in group exercises not only provide an apportunity to find new friends, but also it brings collaboration and cooperation among the members. For instance, I was an innert and anti-social person. One on co-workers invited me to our organization’s private gym club. Although, at first, it seem unpleasent to me, I took the attempt and participated in the club. After a while, I found some good friends in the office, and it promoted my social skills. The repercaussions of this positive attempt is tangible even in my recent activities. I realy changed my behaviour and learned me some unprecidented lessons. Consequently, it can be asserted that group exercising is conucive to attain some social skills and promots you daily life.
Having discussed the issue from previous point of view, I want to focus on the subject from another perspective. Group sports provides an opportunity to get familier with healthy people. Not only does it bring joy and fun, but also it will help you to broaden your horizon. For instance, my older brothr is involved in many branches of sports, karatee, kik box, kungfu, to name but a few. He believes that every person is a treasure of experience by which you can acqiure some unforgettable lessons. Even though he is 27 years old, when he want to speak with people, they consider him as an sophisticated person that illustrated thoughts that are more than his age can supports. All of these advantagous ensue from his interaction with variety of people in the sport groups. Moreover, as I mentioned before, group sports brings happiness to the members. According to the statistics, people involving in group sports have higher wholsome and joy in their life, that is, they have healthier life style in comparison with the one who prefer to exercise alone. All in all, group sports promotes people life style and bring more happiness along with some unforgettable lessons.
To put it in a nutshell, I profoundly believe that the merits of group exercising outwigh the disadvantages. Not only it inhance people’s social skills, but also it brings more happiness in people’s life. Moreover, It provides an oppurtunity to gaing knowledge and experience from a broad spectrum of people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 425, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seems'?
Suggestion: seems
...rivate gym club. Although, at first, it seem unpleasent to me, I took the attempt an...
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Line 3, column 540, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...Even though he is 27 years old, when he want to speak with people, they consider him...
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Line 3, column 588, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...speak with people, they consider him as an sophisticated person that illustrated t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, so, while, at least, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2390.0 1977.66487455 121% => OK
No of words: 461.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18438177874 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05344257501 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548806941432 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 742.5 618.680645161 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9321614642 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3571428571 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4642857143 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.45110844103 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190372839936 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496653830278 0.076458572812 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485325231266 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119359411524 0.150856017488 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181615085603 0.0645574589148 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 86.8835125448 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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