Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Advertisement industry has drastically revolutionized as compared to past decade. The type of advertisement & ad concepts has changed people purchasing behaviors altogether. Some people assert that advertisement makes people purchase the items they are not required with, whereby other are of the opinion that advertisement helps us understand what products can bring ease and efficiency in our lives. Let's discuss both views in detail before reaching to a final verdict.
To begin with, nowadays, there are numerous products which are unnecessary to buy. Advertisements makes the product looks so appealing that irrespective consumer is in need of that product or not tends to purchase it. Advertisement industry uses the emotional appeal in their ads. For instance, in an ad, there is a fruits and vegetable cutting set, that cuts the vegetable and fruits in minutes. They present that product in such a way that consumer feels if he or she does not buy it they would be wasting their time cutting through knife. However, that product just provides an added advantage and many people are using conventional method of cutting easily. Another example would be automatic mops that helps us clean the house more easily and is time saving and the list goes on.
On the flip side, advertisement do help us improve our life standards. By watching certain ad we get to know availability of efficient facilities and productive products that can bring ease in our daily life. For instance, the use of branch less banking, we can pay our bills through mobile; moreover, we can send money to another city to the exact person without the hassle of getting into bank lines conveniently. We are using these facilities only because these products and facilities were projected by media in its true manner.
To summarize the aforementioned, media and advertisement plays a vital role in shaping up an image of a product or a person. To an extent, these advertisements exaggerates the idea to an inappropriate length that consumer feels like product necessary as basic need. Advertisement industry has a big responsibility over them to project the product in its true manner and let the customer decide if he needs the product or not.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, moreover, so, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0904109589 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96007453745 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569863013699 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5123084616 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.222222222 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2777777778 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249366597514 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802989453284 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063428407015 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152233547611 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344031692272 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.