Venus
Both the reading passage and the lecture are about the condition on Venus. The reading passage points out that it will be difficult for human to lives on Venus. The lecturer states that every problem can be solved by using floating balloon, this balloon 15 km meter above the Venus surface.
Firstly, the author states that Venus surface has 90 times greater atmospheric pressure than earth. And also the passage points out that this pressure can crush spacecraft and human. This point is challenged by the lecturer. The professor insists that floating balloon lies 15 kilometer far away from Venus surface, as result of effect of Venus atmospheric pressure on station is same like earth atmospheric pressure. Secondly, the reading points out that Venus do not have water and oxygen and it will be impossible to supply from earth. The lecturer mentions that Venus’s atmosphere consist of gases such as carbon dioxide and sulfuric acid which can uses to produce oxygen and water chemically at the balloon station.
Next, the passage elaborates that about 60 percent of the sunlight that hits Venus is reflected back into space by the thick clouds. Therefore, the lack of light would prevent the use of solar power cells, so humans could not get electricity to power their machines and equipment. This point is refuted by the lecturer. The lecturer elaborates that solar power cells can collect both direct and reflected sunlight.
In conclusion, the reading and the lecture both are about the condition on Venus. The lecturer effectively refutes the point made in the reading passage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Both the reading passage and the lecture...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... 15 km meter above the Venus surface. Firstly, the author states that Venus su...
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Line 2, column 292, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'kilometer' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'kilometers'.
Suggestion: kilometers
...r insists that floating balloon lies 15 kilometer far away from Venus surface, as result ...
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Line 2, column 673, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'use'
Suggestion: use
...bon dioxide and sulfuric acid which can uses to produce oxygen and water chemically ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ter chemically at the balloon station. Next, the passage elaborates that about ...
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Line 3, column 426, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ect both direct and reflected sunlight. In conclusion, the reading and the lectu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1332.0 1373.03311258 97% => OK
No of words: 262.0 270.72406181 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08396946565 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45668732798 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534351145038 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 419.366225166 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5622660505 49.2860985944 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8 110.228320801 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 21.698381199 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06452816374 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334434407191 0.272083759551 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130650620312 0.0996497079465 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113126392416 0.0662205650399 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217834926047 0.162205337803 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918835488065 0.0443174109184 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.3589403974 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 63.6247240618 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.