Televised talent shows have become popular in many societies today. Are these shows a good method of finding talented people, or are they just entertainment.
In many countries, television shows are being watched and discussed. Inside, television talent shows is well-received by the audience. However, I think that is just a game for money and fame.
Almost talent shows are projected in the evening so the viewer is higher than more tv shows different. Advertising and sponsorship help the broadcaster have a lot of money. there are many things that people can participate in, such as singing, dancing, magic, painting.
All of there want to show us talent, but the main purpose is getting bonus and famous. if you achieve the champion, you will be a huge amount. Because there is really a lot of tv show talent, we have many champions and they are missing after show end. if audiences do mind, they will not be famous again. Therefore, television talent shows are classified in entertainment shows.
Conclusive proof for the candidate join the television talent show is just becoming famous, they even do fun things although they do not have talents. For example, Britain’s got talent is organized in London but the participant is mostly foreigners. This is got talent in their country, not the place to public relations for foreigners. All the happens, the purpose of broadcasters is to make money and get attention.
In conclusion, I think television talent shows where is game for money and fame. Not at all the champion is a talented person, we should be careful of all of the people, everyone has their own talents and will know how to make society better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, really, so, therefore, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1282.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0078125 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83652929431 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55078125 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5565446696 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4117647059 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0588235294 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403212702335 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132790524612 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0994454940373 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23841340328 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041958377939 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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